Water - Yoyo-ing...Cutting on multiple (in and out) lengths plus the camera move is jarring / confusing. Cut to water to the length at (0.04) and stay there (no going in close) until you pull back ("Hey" - 0.08). There is no need for a close up or a long pull back on the camera. Keep it simple.
Oxygen - Keep the character at the position at 0.13 / 0.14 so it doesn't cover up irons face and then cut to 0.14 ("Watch out").
Hi Danny
ReplyDeleteWater - Yoyo-ing...Cutting on multiple (in and out) lengths plus the camera move is jarring / confusing. Cut to water to the length at (0.04) and stay there (no going in close) until you pull back ("Hey" - 0.08). There is no need for a close up or a long pull back on the camera. Keep it simple.
Oxygen - Keep the character at the position at 0.13 / 0.14 so it doesn't cover up irons face and then cut to 0.14 ("Watch out").